She's Dating the Gangster by Bianca B. Bernardino (2 star ratings)
I am telling you in advance, “this is a spoiler alert” so if you haven't read the story, then beware. It is a total bummer!This is a tagalog tragic. She dating the gangster wattpad tagalog original story po to, tagalog nga lang. She's dating the She's dating the gangster kathniel original story.5k reads votes 3 part bikei.info kazuto. Ebook reveals secrets to bikei.info, as the. She's Dating the Gangster has ratings and reviews. Carleen said: At first, I was hesitant in reading it since it was in Filipino(tagalog). Yes, Wattpad Books. books Chapter one captured my attention and kept me going on in reading the story. .. Shelves: pinoy, read-as-ebook, pop-fiction, with-review.
First off, the prologue threw me off. It almost sounded like Twilight but instead of a vampire, it's a gangster. Everything between us happened so fast, and our relationship took me completely by surprise.
I mean seriously, let's think more of a unique introduction. Haven't we always came across those kind of lines in other romance teen books, in movies, dramas or even in songs? Most importantly, the book clearly isn't familiar with Show, don't Tell. This is very vital and crucial technique especially in terms of writing fiction that obviously the book has failed to provide us. But then again, what can we expect from such a few-paged book?
If you wanna know more about Show Don't tell. Probably my hatest parts: And Kenji was all like " Yeah sure you can die anytime. You won't see me again. That was probably an awful way to end a relationship with someone especially your ex who is dying. I know Abigail is the least favorite here, but Kenji's still arrogant personality threw me off a bit here. I thought he changed. Still he's an undeveloped character.
I rushed to his side. Kenji was all wrapped in a blanket and shaking violently. How do you shake violently? Is it with eyes going white? Anyways, when I read the part "violently" I already imagined him in a convulsion state. How do you show "violently" at that part? And to think it was just a high fever Usually it would take about half a day for a person to have a fever after getting soaked in wet clothes and cold rain. You don't happened to have a fever in a snap of a finger.
The characters were not interesting. You have this bad boy falls in love with the new girl in school and blah, blah, blah. You get the picture.
It's mostly a copy-pasted characters from Kdramas such as "Boys over Flowers" and some American chick flicks. Athena Dizon- A flat character. Aside from not really letting us know her perspective in life, it lacked realism specifically when it comes to her emotions. Most are just rants.
She's Dating the Gangster
Sure, there were phrases such as "I cried I blinked back my tears", but emotions aren't only based on actions. They are also revealed internally- on her thoughts, opinions, realizations and feelings. That's why there was no connection between Athena and I, because her thoughts were limited.
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It was hard reading her which shouldn't be if she's Bella Swan, that is lol because First person are the most intimate with readers since both parties know what the character is feeling throughout the story. Also, Athena which should be, again is not very observant to the things around her and how her life goes.
Also, she has illness, but how could I feel sympathy at her when the author doesn't clearly know how to feel what it's like to be dying. I mean, I'm not saying I have a cancer and I'm dying or that you should really experience something to write about it, no I was like all, "Okay, she's sick.
It must have been an easy read but it really was not. Some stories I've read before were cliche but at least they were written properly. I barely got through chapter 15 and this story has 50 chapters if I'm not m A lot of my friends recommended this so I thought that I may give this story a chance.
I barely got through chapter 15 and this story has 50 chapters if I'm not mistaken.
The characters had the potential to be good but they were really poorly described and written. Plus, it was really irritating to see various emoticons. And by emoticons, I do not mean the simple emoticons.
Some sentence were in Tagalog then the next was in English then later some Korean expression will be inserted.
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There were words that really bothered me. I think it was the word "hindi". Instead of using the correct spelling, she used "hinde" and it's so annoying to read.
There were too many imperfections of this story but I won't mention them all. Most importantly, I felt like this "book" doesn't have a plot. Okay, it has one but it was too confusing and indirect. I really resisted the urge to just leave the story unfinished. I really wanted to stop reading.